Maria draws her hand to mouth and bites as Nathan licks and sucks her clitoris. His tongue encircles the flesh tightly and then laps quickly. Almost as suddenly, the tongue opens and lies flatly upon Maria's vagina. Nathan exhales heavily and glides his mouth upward until the tip of his tongue finds the clitoris again.
Maria’s moans fill the room. She grabs the back of Nathan’s head and pulls it closer to her pelvis, lifting her hips from the damp sheets. Nathan becomes ravenous. Nibbling and lapping uncontrollably. Maria’s mind tries to follow every touch. Record every sensation. Her legs spring open and Nathan’s fingers join his tongue; finding their way inside Maria. Her hands tug at the bed sheets, and her cries pierce the air.
Nathan raises his head. He gently kisses the inside of Maria’s moist thighs. He climbs atop her and their eyes meet. Briefly, they smile at each other and share a kiss.
Transfixed upon Maria’s brown eyes, Nathan aligns his body with hers. She opens her legs wider to receive him. He pushes deeper inside Maria. Mouth agape, she wants to scream, but there is no sound. Nathan slides his sweet tongue into her mouth and sucks her upper lip.
Methodically, his hips rise and fall while his kisses become more aggressive. Sound returns. Maria screams. In stride with Nathan’s rhythm, she begs him not to stop. Nathan releases a low growl. A spastic wave consumes Maria’s body. Nathan grinds his pelvis and kisses her neck. Maria wraps Nathan in her embrace and he groans loudly.
Soon silence befalls the room. Without raising his head, Nathan calls, “Maria?”
“Yes?” she answers as strokes his hair.
“I love you and ... you know what else I love?”
“Blueberry pancakes?”
“With maple syrup!" he says excitedly. "I love your pancakes. Would you mind making a few? I’ll scramble the eggs.”
“Nathan, you can have whatever you want.” Maria slaps his butt. “What-ever you want.”
Nathan laughs loudly. “May be the pancakes can wait for now. I want another taste of you.”
- Michelle
First let me say I love this. How very Mills and Boon. I look forward to reading more excerpts from your unpublished books.
ReplyDeleteThat's what am talking about. As flo said, you've been holding back this side of you but now I see. Interesting.
ReplyDeleteJust hot Michelle. The heat kept me transfixed on the edge of my bed this morning, forgetting that I have work! I gotta go. Continuation..... Linne
ReplyDeleteWell now! Whew! You went there and went well. There is risk in writing this style of prose, but what an excellent composition. The symmetry from one movement (figuratively speaking) to the next is excellent. Well-balanced in composition. The content, hot as hell! The love-making, simply divine. I need to take a cold shower now (smile)--whew!!
ReplyDeleteEmmett, I read, "Well now!" and laughed so much. A super goofy laugh. All of you -- including Flo, Liz, and Linne -- crack me up with your responses. As the saying goes, "I ain't dead down there." LOL
ReplyDeleteHowever, I agree that erotica can make or break a writer. Personally, I do not like the genre. At heart, I am a romantic and crave a bond between the lovers of a story. Sadly, I do not craft a solid plot with this entry, so I depict the sensual breadth of a moment.
I wrote a story earlier this year that focuses on a couple's relationship, and I think it is better than this entry because readers get character development, not just character climaxxx. :>
http://straightuphudson.blogspot.com/2010/02/32-day-writing-challenge-day-30.html
Nevertheless, thank you for reading and for making me laugh.