"just once please
it won't hurt"he says
with smoldering eyes
closer and closer
he moves
a novice i am
scared
tight lipped,we merge
gasping
comes invasion
goaded into response
excitement floods me
never felt much butterflies
quivering stomach
a shot of warmth in my mid riff
an explosion of sensation
a thirst craving to be quenched
more tightly i hold
fear forgotten
it's just us
closer to heaven
i can feel
yes!
i can see the stars, moon
beautiful
blissful
at last in my hands-
a taste of heaven
unexpected bliss.
LIZ
Well, hot damn! What a way to begin my morning! : )
ReplyDeleteProvocative and racy in content; skilled and dignified in composition. Your earlier writings are hints of your strength as a writer, but this poem soldifies your presence as a poet. Great work, Liz.
thanx shells really appreciate it. i do my best i try to get better each day, i want to grow with every piece of writing i put across. once again thank u.
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